Birds chipped and children yelled as the Monday afternoon arrived. “Hey rom15, get a band and pair up we are going outside to do some fun things.” said Mr.marks as he weirdly walk off into the dissents. Slowly, and carefully we walked towards the junior courts.
A challenging sports event was set up. We had to run up and down the courts...it may sound easy but here’s what you don’t realised. We have to run like we have amputated limbs, just like the paralympics athletes.
Hi laita you got a really great story. But please Check your capital letters. Keep it up.
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ReplyDeleteYour writing is so good. On the beginning there is a mistake on the Hey room 15 part. Your writing is a amazing piece of work. Hope you post another great work.
See ya
Hi Laita
ReplyDeleteI really love your paralympics game it's the best blog I have seen so far
Hi Laita I loved reading your sporty story. I have spotted a mistake but it's okay because everyone makes mistakes. Between Mr Marks you put a full stop. Besides that you have write a great piece of writing. Keep up the effort!
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