Sisilia, Taylah and Laita D.L.O

Laita, Sisilia and Taylah's D.L.O from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

Movie Reflection

In my group, there were three people. (Sisilia, Taylah, and Me). I think that we worked well together, as  a group. But just only on the planning week. We all worked hard and independently.

On the planning week we all tried our best to finish our planning. And soon in the end it was finished.  It was in great detail, enough to follow. But along the way we did try and change it just to improve our movie a little.

Our purpose was to show a person's perspective about the Vietnam war. I think if we had had a voice over then it could have improved our marks. We did write one but we just didn't record it. Overall I think how we showed our message was okay.

Our filming techniques were actually not that bad. Besides us moving the camera every single time. The weakness was mostly because we didn't use a tripod.

But on the other hand we did have go angels and shots.

The graphics which I drew, I think were great quality.

They were detailed enough and included detailed backgrounds.

I didn't  traced or even have an idea of tracing.

I just wanted to challenge myself.

Last but not least the sequencing or flow.

I think it flowed quite well...but it really needed the voice over. Without the voice over it just looks like a bunch of pictures thrown together. But the soundtrack was suitable.

It was sad and also at the same time it was explaining a story.

In end we all worked hard, and tried our best. But I do think we could have improved our techniques and skills to make an even more better film. Like putting in more acting, animations and improving showing our messages. But that’s next time...

BEST FRIENDS!!!

Best Friends Movie. Asena, Tui, Jasmine, Ashlee! from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

I thought it was really clear and amazing...

Two best  friends, are still friends after 6 years and a few months. I also liked the fact that they used different shots and kept it flowing.

Although there were no acting, I reckon that the cheerful smiles did enough.

But it would have been great to see graphics and pictures. I think it would have stood out more, and would have been even more enjoyable to watch. But...

At the end of the movie I think they would have work well and hard together. Which is great.. :D

Nelson Mandela and Martin Luther King...

My Rap about Nelson Mandela and Martin Luther King

Nelson Mandela  and Martin Luther King
Are two important people, according to history.
 Fighting, and willing to make a change,
They stood in the world that we're  in today.
But through the progress of fighting for civil rights,
Martin Luther King was the one that had to die.
But before his time had come to an end,
He was stabbed on the back, while sighing with a pen.
Many other attacks were on their way,
But Martin Luther King didn't know until that day.
When he passed away. Nelson Mandela was a successful guy,
But it's still amazing that he's still alive.
95 years old of age,
He was born peaceful but full of rage.


AND....

Our  story about Nelson Mandela and Martin Luther King...


Martin Luther King and Nelson Mandela are two very important people. They have both made establishing history, and fairness in the world between the White and Dark people. But through the progress of fighting for civil rights, they have both suffered painful violence. Especially Martin Luther King he had suffered death.

But before his time had ended, he succeeded on bringing recital equality. But in order to do that there had to be a lot of protesting. Which not a lot of people did n't liked. Meaning there were a lot attack during his time.

His House was blown up into pieces  along with his church. Many others attacks, such as getting stabbed on the back (while signing a book), were soon on their way.

Reaching our goals and not letting go

Hello,
My writing is here from Wednesday morning. Each fort night Me and my Senior friends route into different groups.

#1 Inquiry
We go into different classes. So we can can focus on our subjects and improve.....
(This one is great, you improve on time limits and  your art)

#2 Creative Strand
We choose rather to go and create art with Miss Tito. Or we could go to Miss Kings class and make movies.

(They are both great but, I prefer to go to Miss Tito's class. Each and every fort night. But hey that's just for me =D)

Anyway, I was in Inquiry this week and this is what I made.

ENJOY READING MY WRITING......

My movie (English)

Laitas movie (English) from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

This is my movie which I had to make, using maori but I thought I would make it in English before making it in maori. Hope you enjoy my great movie...=D

prospective student

With perseverance and determination, the prospective student climbed towards the top of the lofty mountain.  Inch by Inch, he climbed on a tenuous  grip. Finally, after a long time of climbing he stood looking at his final destination. THE DOJO.....

Little Red in Ridding Hood

Similarity!	Contrast!
She is Red riding hood	She is Kind
She is Spoilt	She helps her Mum
She is  Cheeky	She is a carrying child
She is Naughty	She is clever/Brainy
She is Mean	She was friendly
She is Selfish	She was a generous
She was Lazy	She always clean’s around the house.
She always get what she wants.	She doesn’t mind what she has to do!

Here is what I wrote with Mele, and Tauwhare

         

  Once upon a time, in a bright, friendly modest house....there lived a little girl named, LITTLE RED. Quite often she wouldn’t listen to her parents. Several times, they try to get her to do the littlest thing. So, they’d always had  to bribe her with treats, in order to make her do something. But....

        ......one day her mother asked her to go out  and visit her grandmother. SHE lived a few blocks away in another  suburb called Riding Hood . Riding Hood was on the other side of the pine plantation and the quickest way was right through the pines.

          After moaning and groaning, Little Red took a little cheesecake from her mother and set off through the plantation. As she got closer and closer to her grandmother house, red came across something weird.

        A wolf appeared in the pines. Red panic having never to see a wolf before, wandering through the pines.  Red thought to herself thinking that the wolf might of escaped from the zoo.  She grabbed her phone out of her pocket and dialed the zoo number.

        She waited for someone to pick up,but nobody did. As fast as she could, she ran to the zoo. But as she was halfway there she remembered about her grandma. She ran quickly through the pines. “No,NO,NO.....I can’t die today!”

  She rushed back, straight through the pines, hoping to get there unharmed. Finally, she arrived at

HER GRANDMOTHERS HOUSE....

‘KNOCK, KNOCK’, tapped Little Red on the door,’Grandma, are you home.?’ Searching for the shadow of Grandma, Red came across something strange, weird in fact. A note on the fridge. ‘Hello, dear can you leave the cheesecake in the fridge, please dear.....Thank you’

Red, gazed at the note and suddenly said, “Thanks for nothing..”. She turned around to someones hairy feet.